I started trying to color this and realised that all that cel-shading, plus the heavy use of traditional media in my art class left me completely out of practice for my normal style. Good opportunity to experiment a little though, tried a few things if you couldn't style; some I liked, some I didn't.
It may look like I got lazy on the background, but really I just didn't want to detract from the character...yeah, I'm going with that excu-er reason, yeah, reason.
Wow, this is really good! Drew my eye immediately. I love the texture on her shorts, and the way the stripes are stretched over her breasts.
If you don't mind me saying, the only critique I can offer is to maybe fix her right hand holding the cup... The way her fingers are wrapped around it, the cup looks flat! From that angle, you'd only see the tips of her fingers and thumb.
Other than that, it's great! The background's far more than I do on my art. XD And the shading on her hair and stomach is amazing!
Shame "Mcdonalds" doesn't actually make you fat, despite the urban legend.. Food ain't that good for ya, but it by itself can't make you fat...
Anyways, I've already told you about the stuff I think could be improved from what I could see. I'll tell you the rest once I stop staring at her face and take a gander at her whole body... XD
Thanks, I think this is the first time I've drawn denim that I've been able to get the texture the way I want it. I knew something was bugging me when I was shading the cup, I thought it was just that I was getting lazy about it, but your right, the fingers are really off. O.o
Thanks again for the comment. ^^
I hate McDonalds food too ... from the commercials, places like that must make people stupid. Example, they had a guy going on and on about how their food was the only thing worth waking up to ... and here's his girlfriend looking at him, asking him about her. He backpedals faster than Teddy after his infamous swim.
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If you don't mind me saying, the only critique I can offer is to maybe fix her right hand holding the cup... The way her fingers are wrapped around it, the cup looks flat! From that angle, you'd only see the tips of her fingers and thumb.
Other than that, it's great! The background's far more than I do on my art. XD And the shading on her hair and stomach is amazing!
Anyways, I've already told you about the stuff I think could be improved from what I could see. I'll tell you the rest once I stop staring at her face and take a gander at her whole body... XD
Thanks again for the comment. ^^
Instant fav, btw
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I hate McDonalds food too ... from the commercials, places like that must make people stupid. Example, they had a guy going on and on about how their food was the only thing worth waking up to ... and here's his girlfriend looking at him, asking him about her. He backpedals faster than Teddy after his infamous swim.
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Loonia Infinity
The Balloon Princess
"The sky's the limit, eh? We'll see about that ..."
**Slow and Deep Inhale can be heard ...**
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Shakshi! - Kuro
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